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If I Said...Would You
Contributed by
linagalMBfan01
on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:55:00 PM in AEST
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If I said I love you,
would you turn away from me,
never speak to me again,
and wonder why I said it?
If I said I'm not ready,
would you force me to,
make me scream in pain,
and listen to me cry?
If I said please stop,
would you still hurt me,
make me hate myself,
and enjoy my pain?
If I said please stay,
would you keep walking,
leave me there to cry,
and disappear forever?
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Re: If I Said...Would You
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 11:16:50 PM AEST
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hey i like it and yes maybe u could make it longer but its up to u thanks for the good read.
and read some of mine and also i got ur email and i replyed to it so read it and reply ok ttyl bye
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Re: If I Said...Would You
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by Baby_Grl on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:17:18 AM AEST
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This is a nice write Lina, good job on it and I hope you will read mine. Write more love to read.
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Re: If I Said...Would You
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by thumper on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 12:48:03 AM AEST
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This is good, sweetie! I like it and I believe it's done. What more could you add? It feels complete to me, anyways. Write on, kiddo, write on.
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Re: If I Said...Would You
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by Doubtless_One on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:52:16 PM AEST
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| it seems two me that your talking to 2 people here. one you seem to love and the other seems to only bring you pain but. the one who you love may be a should to cry on i dont think he'd be the kind to just walk away (if he loves you too). |
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