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Being Me
Contributed by
linagalMBfan01
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Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 11:08:23 PM in AEST
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I'm going to class and I hear someone whisper,
"Oh my god look at her" and i see everyone,
looking at me with my hair cut short,
my skirt real tight and short not matching the rest,
I've given up on what people think of me,
they think my life is theirs, but it's not,
it's my life and I'll dress how I feel,
I'll be who I want to be and do what I want,
I won't be who they want me to be,
I won't do what they tell me to do,
they're all free to be who they want to be,
why can't I have my freedom?,
I want to be me and not care what they say,
I want to express myself freely,
without people judging my every move,
some day this will happen,
I will be me with no one else inside.
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linagalMBfan01
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2005-04-15 23:08:23]
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Re: Being Me
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by hellsfallenangel on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 11:20:48 PM AEST
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i like it its very good and your right u should care what anyone else think u should dress or act like ok well g2g bye bye
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Re: Being Me
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by freckle on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:06:00 PM AEST
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I liked your poem. I have one that is kind of similar. I think I titled it 'Poem'. Definately be yourself. I think that is so important. Wear whatever the heck you wanna; unless it could get you arrested...hee hee...again though, good write.
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Re: Being Me
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by Baby_Grl on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:22:37 AM AEST
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Very good write girl..very good. I wish I can write good as you. But your right, be wat ur want to be, dont care or listen to wat people are saying about you, there just jealous because there not as gorgous and beautiful as you. But good write. Good job.
Baby_Grl
P.S. I just wish I have the guts to tell my parents about that. lol. Good write!! |
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Re: Being Me
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by moon_light on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:40:12 AM AEST
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| i remeber you let me reed this one. and what did i say. 'you shouldent care your beter then them!' love you siss. no mater what things will always be the same between us. no mater what siss. i love ya. |
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