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Wild Sun
Contributed by
mickey
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Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 08:17:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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You do not grow.
You do not shrink.
You only set and rise.
Tell me what you have seen
And I will listen.
Meanwhile the earth still turns.
Meanwhile time ticks by.
Meanwhile the moon wants to play.
Whoever you are.
The world still turns.
Please my sun, dont go away.
Copyright ©
mickey
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2005-04-16 08:17:07]
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Re: Wild Sun
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by gothchic on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:08:58 AM AEST
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| you seem like you have a connection to the celestial universe, keep writing about it |
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Re: Wild Sun
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 01:57:20 PM AEST
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That was light and airy and fun. Nice write
Whisper |
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Re: Wild Sun
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 05:10:21 PM AEST
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| that's exactly what the sun is like. and it was a great way to explain it. |
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Re: Wild Sun
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:24:31 PM AEST
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Nice...Interesting....God Bless
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