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hidden escape
Contributed by
gothchic
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Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 10:25:28 AM in AEST
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oops
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Surrounded by my own fear
Suffering from being here
In this dark place
Not seeing a single face
Craving freedom soon
As I stare at the rising moon
The place I sit
I soon see it
I looked deeper into the cave
And found my escape.
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Re: hidden escape
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:26:47 AM AEST
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I like this...it's 'jumpy' I guess... if you know what I mean. lol.
But, most definatly in a good way.
I think, we al need an escape every so often, or we'd go crazy.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: hidden escape
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 12:06:17 PM AEST
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A beautiful peice of poetry, tainted with the
hurt that quietly shows through, yes an
escape, a most sort after comodity these
days, second only 2 money, well done . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: hidden escape
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by Azul_Panther on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 06:24:55 PM AEST
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| beautiful, that is a very touching poem...I wish more people could express that way. JA NE |
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