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refugee
Contributed by
Bianca
on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:26:51 AM in AEST
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oops
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i have fled to the pillars of intense
enjoyment
where i can flee safe
in the heart of a neverland, or
dodge flying palaces, loaded
with
guns.
Copyright ©
Bianca
... [
2005-04-16 11:26:51]
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Re: refugee
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by Archie on
Thursday, 15th September 2005 @ 11:43:33 AM AEST
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| I think this means more than the sum of its words but i can not quite put my finger on it |
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Re: refugee
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by sillysal on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 11:49:45 AM AEST
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This is a confusing write that has all the elements of good poetry but the thoughts are somewhat scrambled.
It sounds as if, no matter how one imagines things, how outlandish they may be, they can't escape war, death, etc. Needs a bit of clarification in my humble estimation.
:)Sandy |
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