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Tell Me Again
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 05:36:46 PM in AEST
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Why is it im cursed,
Tell me wont you please.
Im tired of suffering,
And begging on my knees.
All my life,
Ive seen only pain.
And my friend, my blade,
Has only seen my vein.
My body wont stop shaking,
It hurts inside and out.
I dont know why this happens,
Or what it's all about.
I dont know how or why,
Or when it began to start.
But I know it bruised my soul,
And tore apart my heart.
My mind's just one big puzzle,
With all the peices gone.
I knew something was missing,
Why am I so wrong?
Billions of people in the world,
Why am I the misfit?
My candle's dimmed,
While their's remains lit.
So tell me again,
Oh Lord, what did I do?
How in the world,
Did I ever offend you?
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Re: Tell Me Again
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by poet_of_anger on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 08:01:16 PM AEST
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| Very very nice. The emotion is great, and I can feel for you. You aren't a misfit, there are many many people who are in the same place as you. |
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Re: Tell Me Again
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 09:56:03 PM AEST
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A sad but beautiful poem some one is reading your pain . . . ((((4U))))
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Re: Tell Me Again
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by emystar on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:04:46 PM AEST
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U aren't a misfit. We all have demons to deal with in one or the other.
U didn't offiend god u offeinded yourself.
Trust God and he will see u thru this.
God doesn't make bad things happen 'cause he's a god of luv, compassion, un-dying luv, mercy, grace, joy, peace, happiness.
beleive that and u will find strength to over come.
I'm putting u on my prayer list.
luv, huggs,
emy
P.m. any time.
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