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In The Sky...
Contributed by
ronald
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Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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You can survive,
The tunnel of life,
Never doubt your heart,
Lest you'll be apart.
Just keep your faith burning,
Let it fulfill your yearning,
Someday you'll soar up high,
Like the eagle... in the sky...
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ronald
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2002-12-23 10:30:00]
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Re: In The Sky...
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 01:09:31 PM AEST
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Very inspirational poem Ronald...i thank you my friend for sharing this one, it's beautiful and has a strong message behind it...Keep em' coming....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: In The Sky...
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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Great sentiment but the last line of the first verse seems to me too mundane. I've tried to write something better but failed so ............
I shouldn't be criticising should I.
A very nice thought. |
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