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The Break Up
Contributed by
xtcslilangel
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Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:57:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Good morning and goodnight,
Goodnight and morning, too.
Your voice was like a soaring kite,
That now is sad and blue.
You need to understand,
It was a one time thing.
It wasn't was a demand,
Nor was it a fling.
He meant nothing to me,
But you came from above.
I am now as hopeless as can be,
Could it have been love?
I have nothing more to say to you,
You wouldn't even listen.
For what I tell you now is true,
So, now there's only missin'.
When I am left I feel alone,
I feel so hurt and bare.
I feel like I have been thrown,
From one who does not care.
I hear your voice inside my head
And I try not to cry.
I lay still on my little bed,
Thinking about the lie.
How could I have done this I think,
And for what was the outcome?
For just a little sip or drink,
But now I see we're done.
I did not mean to hurt you so,
I feel the pain as well.
I do not want to let you go,
On that I can only dwell.
Now, there's only one path left,
We may not be together.
I feel like we have unraveled this weft,
But I will forget this never.
Another day, another night,
Why is there no call?
I feel my body building with fright,
Like a helpless doll.
Please don't try to make me ache,
I was stupid and naive.
I don't want our bond to break,
I thought you could believe.
Another day, another night,
Is this because of you?
I guess I will turn out the light,
Because this realationship is through.
So, I guess now it's over,
I don't know what else to do.
I couldn't be any lonelier,
I don't know about you.
I have learned a lot from this,
I know about being true.
I guess we've had our last kiss,
Maybe that's good news for you.
My time with you was fun,
You have to admit, it was fun for you, too.
Now I know that we are done
And I feel truly blue.
I am sad that we've split apart,
Maybe it's for the better.
But now I have a broken heart,
Should I have given you this letter?
I have learned my lesson,
I won't ever do this again.
So, now I'm left here guessin',
If you'll forgive and call again.
Copyright ©
xtcslilangel
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Re: The Break Up
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 12:43:25 AM AEST
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Kayla, this is a sad, deep and emotional write. I can feel ur pain and anguish through ur words. I hope ur guy can find it deep in his heart to forgive u, for u sound like someone who is geniunely sorry. Hang tuff friend and may everything work out for u. You need a friend I'm here for u ok.
Otherwise a deeply expressed and very well written poem. Goodluck Kayla.
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Re: The Break Up
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 06:44:51 AM AEST
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Awaaaaaaa I can feel your pain and know the feeling of being there.Whenever love walks out its always you, you blame. Nothing is further from the truth,then the thought I've been used.Even that doesn't mean a thing--nothing,but nothing eases the pain.
Excelent write--post more.
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