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Strife's Slave
Contributed by
mnk_1112
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Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:35:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Sleeping then creeping
while falling and crawling
t'ward all you hold dear
beneath all that you fear.
In this binding cold darkness
with its lonely harsh starkness
they turn sinister smiles
corn'ring you with their guile.
And fight as you may,
you'll ne'er once reach the day
where you have a free life-
you're owned by your strife...
Copyright ©
mnk_1112
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2005-04-17 01:35:32]
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Re: Strife's Slave
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by emystar on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:48:58 AM AEST
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very interesting, thougt provoking write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Strife's Slave
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by desireemiote on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:57:18 AM AEST
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totally feel you on this one...stress relief is never a complete relief and so u automatically get stressed right away again...ARGH! sorry personal problems
but i liked the poem!
love always
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Re: Strife's Slave
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 06:19:32 AM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful poem
well done i reeli liked this |
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