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Stains of Hated Love
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 07:39:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The soul is broken
And unable to mend
Another blade tainted
Causing blood and tears to blend
The blackened heart breaks
From the bloody stains
Cracking and crumbling
A love beyond the reasonable sustain
The blood bleeds
Sieves out of the skin
Dripping like rain
Another teary eyed grin
The love from the heart
Hated yet unfiegned
Dependant on the drug
Of bleeding out pain
...
But no more worries,
It's time to go to sleep
Maybe someday I'll awake
And this'll all just be a dream
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
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2005-04-17 19:39:38]
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Re: Stains of Hated Love
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by Tru2Myself on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 07:57:10 PM AEST
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Absolutely amazing... no other way to put it. I LOVE THIS. I loved reading it... its amazing. I love you work. WOW
Lauren |
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Re: Stains of Hated Love
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:36:16 PM AEST
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i agree with lauren i love this piece also.
its dark and emotional
"The love from the heart
Hated yet unfiegned
Dependant on the drug
Of bleeding out pain" that line blew me away.
i can relate to this piece very much
keep up ur brilliant work |
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Re: Stains of Hated Love
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:48:43 PM AEST
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| all of your poems make me wish that i would have thought of the verses before you so that i could have the pride of saying they are my own. |
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Re: Stains of Hated Love
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 01:52:07 AM AEST
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This was beautiful... I too wish this is a
dream, but sadly wishes never come true. I
liked this a lot but I think the 2nd stanza was
my favourite.
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Re: Stains of Hated Love
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by freckle on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 07:42:59 PM AEST
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Good poem, sad, but good. I especially liked this part:
The blood bleeds
Sieves out of the skin
Dripping like rain
Another teary eyed grin
I really like the line about it being like a sieve. Really good imagery.
Carol |
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