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died today
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:42:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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To think that I could be happy
Was just foolishness within
Now tears stream down my face
And my faith wears so thin
At last I felt that I could live
That I had reason and purpose
But things turn on me again
I wait for the pain to surface
Holding it inside burns so deep
I just want to move on
But no matter how hard I try
I will never be that strong
Despite what you see on the outside
Im desperately screaming inside
I lie to you with a fake smile
My anguish I will hide
To those with life I cant compare
My death will bring much rejoice
For no matter how loud I shout
No one will ever hear my voice
So I return to old tears
Im so sick of crying it all away
But Ive no other choice, I cant live on
Ive already died today
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Re: died today
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:47:00 PM AEST
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awww so sad, the last stanza just broke my heart.
touching poetry and i can tell it is straight from ur heart. beautiful and u dont kno how much i can relate to ur thoughts
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Re: died today
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by TheVoice on
Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 10:37:43 PM AEST
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there are many different types of death. there are even those from which one can be alive again. the right person with the kind of love that is needed can revive those thought to be lost forever.
great write.
The Voice
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Re: died today
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 12:45:24 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and heartbreaking. Thanks Shey |
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Re: died today
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 09:30:03 PM AEST
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awww... jennie! i feel it to. talk to me always and forever. great write.
~sprints |
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