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Tears
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 08:36:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Tears are falling from my eyes.
I wonder if any1 can hear my cries.
If they could would they even care?
Or would they just stand and stare?
I feel like cutting myself with the sharpest knife.
Maybe I should just end my life.
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Re: Tears
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by sandysandysandy on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 09:39:08 AM AEST
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| I care. Goes into room. says it. I care. gives you a hug and say I will be there whenever you need to talk. as for the write and style of your poem. liked it very much because it rhymes the right way. and you said everything in your heart. YOur special. you have a gift. use it to help others . you know how they feel because your living it. but you know deep within you don't want to. so help others and let them help you. a gift that has been given to you to reach others. can't help another without being there yourself... |
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Re: Tears
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by Ruby1987 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 10:31:42 AM AEST
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definately self struggle here!
I guess everyone feels a little down and some more than others!
but i hope and pray that its not that bad that the only way is the last line of your poem! but believe me people do hear you when you cry! I did! if you need to talk or need some advice please send me a message or my sista Persia because she's been through that!
dont worry i care and believe me there are others who care about you
ruby
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Re: Tears
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 11:14:51 AM AEST
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gosh, so much said in so few words. im amazed at how powerful this poem is even though it's not that long. i am at that point in time in my life where i am struggling with the fight against addiction. i am a cutter and know just how hard it is to stop. im here if you EVER need to talk.
dont give up, luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: Tears
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:38:16 PM AEST
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a powerful write
dont give up on hope, even when there is no light
megs |
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