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Smiles turn to Tears
Contributed by
Yecal
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Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 05:48:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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When you look at me
you see a little happy girl
you see a smile
But that smile hides something
it hides everything that happens
inside im crying
inside im hurt
inside I try to forget what happens
but it only forgets on the outside
and now it's getting so hard to hide
but that one smile
will have to save me for now.
Copyright ©
Yecal
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2005-04-18 17:48:00]
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Re: Smiles turn to Tears
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 05:54:49 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was an imazing poem. I can relate so deeply to it's meaning. You have put into words what I have tried several times, albeit failed, but yours is beautiful and imaginative. Your metaphors are genuinlly unique and expressive. Your meaning clearly displayed, but yet has a hint of wonder. Congratulations. Great Write. |
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Re: Smiles turn to Tears
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by justme03 on
Monday, 18th April 2005 @ 08:11:34 PM AEST
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i absolutly love your poems. this one sorta reminds me of one i started to write the other day....ill post it when im done...
but neway thats an awesome poem and i kno how it is hiding behind a smile and all.
keep up writing the awesome poems dude
:D
Hugs,
Kortnie |
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