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...i try...
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Ive had a lot of time to think lately
And Ive looked back on the things I have done
You tell me that it wasnt worth it
You point out to me where I went wrong
It may seem that I dont agree
But I do see what youre trying to say
I did some stuff that I thought Id never do
And I ended up this way
But even though I do understand
What you want me to do
You cant possibly know how I feel
No matter how much I want you to
I wish you could just, for a minute,
Stop and see things my way
No, Im not perfect, Im not brilliant
I took the wrong path, went astray
I look back and I see the line
That I never should have crossed
But after all of this time spent on the other side
Its hard to get back what Ive lost.
Im sorry if it seems I dont get
What youre saying to me.
Trust me, I know, I get it all now
But Im telling you its not that easy.
It's going to be difficult
I promise, honest I try
Im trying my best to overcome
My fears and the tears that I cry
So promise me that you will not tell
And I promise you that I see
Even though its going to be hard
I just wanna know u support me
Im going to try to patch up
These holes I have dug so deep
And just maybe, I promise Ill try
Ill try my best to fix me
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blue_angel
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2005-04-19 18:43:13]
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Re: ...i try...
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by savedbydeath on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 06:59:25 PM AEST
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sorry to hear that ur past sounds sad,but the only 1 who can help u is urself,yeah sure u can have motivation and support and all in all only u can help,i wish u the best in recovering and living for today and not the past,awesome write,keep up the great job!!!
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Re: ...i try...
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by Jaycee on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:08:03 PM AEST
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Hi Jennie
Probably all of us who have offered well meaning advice blind ourselves to you and where you are at. Certainly some of the lines in this well crafted poem I feel are directed to me and it was never my intent to be part of the problem. I do want to be more supportive and less, I dunno, a pain in the posterior. Good luck! |
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