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Dog Friend & demons
Contributed by
jcscorpio73
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:28:58 PM in AEST
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Sweet dog friend
Living in this rats-nest
Fleas & flies & wooden wall eyes
Ice in glass
Rum, Ass, & grass
I feel unusually happy, for now
But still curiously wading through despair
These demons
My demons
Floating around the incense stench fillled room
Of maybe not tomorrow
I go on tonight
In realization of the wonderful
Who am I?
What should I be?
All along
In agreement
With the mind of realization
I must admit
Lately, things have been good for me
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jcscorpio73
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Re: Dog Friend & demons
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 07:38:48 PM AEST
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nuthin wrong with writing poetyr on the fly, least i don't think there is, considering i do such a thing. Anyway, Very well written. Love the rhyme scemes, and the line
" I feel unusually happy, for now
But still curiously wading through despair"
along with well...the rest of the poem. Awsomely done.
klia
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