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Tears of a Heart
Contributed by
rakerman1999
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Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:44:16 PM in AEST
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Like a whisper at night
in the dark, out of sight
silently, fall the tears of a heart
Not a single sound makes
as it quietly breaks
from the pain of when worlds come apart
They don't stream down the face
leave no trail or trace
you can't wipe them away with your hand
It's the weeping inside
for a dream that has died
over reasons it can't understand
Watch it now as it cries
Listen close for the sighs
You will never be able to tell
Of the agony felt
or the dirty deeds dealt
though it's living its own private hell
Hearts will hide what they feel
and deny what is real
so that "one" other heart doesn't know
How 'til it beats its last
it will live in the past
hiding love that it never dare show
L. Carling c2005
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rakerman1999
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:51:06 PM AEST
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This is a touching and sad write, I like the way it flows and i love the first verse.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 10:22:40 PM AEST
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aww Larry this brought tears to my eyes very sad hope your ok
Michelle |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 12:31:26 AM AEST
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"It's the weeping inside
for a dream that has died"
I just can't get over those two lines Larry. You
have just captured a lot of how I feel in the
beautiful lines of your latest piece. The
sadness in this poem was evident from the
outset. You rarely hold back when you write
and it was no different here you just let out all
your feelings in an outlet of emotions. Thanks
for sharing this and I pray you aren't actually
feeling like this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 05:41:24 AM AEST
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Wow..the last verse is what did it to me.... I love this... Good work, Larry..
Jenni |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:59:06 PM AEST
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Amazing write Larry from one of my fav poets.
Magnificent you have a way with almost any words
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by freckle on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 04:23:35 PM AEST
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This is a classic. I loved it. The flow was wonderful and the imagery so real. Truly a masterpiece.
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:51:24 AM AEST
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You never fail to inspire more respect from me for you and your talent Larry. Truly one of my favorites to date if a "one" must be chosen. It flows with ease and reads spectacularly. Well penned, Sir.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:08:27 AM AEST
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Larry this was just so sad, i feel like crying after reading your words.
Hearts will hide what they feel
and deny what is real
so that "one" other heart doesn't know
How 'til it beats its last
it will live in the past
hiding love that it never dare show
That's such a powerful line the emotions are just pouring out from every single letter.
Jane~
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by OnAngelswings on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:23:32 PM AEST
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| I love this...you are such a treasure...you are so gifted...have a good day!!!!!Shari :) |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 02:16:50 PM AEST
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wow.....wow
I like this alot! It is clevr, almost somehow romantic and so full of emotion.....wonderful! |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:08:35 PM AEST
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Very touching, Just so hearfelt and amazing as normal tho, So much great work from you...
~Clark |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 08:36:50 PM AEST
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| I believe that a poet should make the reader feel. This made me feel to my very soul; I'm crying.. |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by ruthie1983 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:19:05 PM AEST
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| Another good poem. I totally agree when u say, "Hearts will hide what they feel and deny what is read so that "one" other heart doesnt know." Good job! |
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Re: Tears of a Heart
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by Karazoul on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:16:11 PM AEST
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| Wow. This is beautiful! I love it! |
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