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Willing
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:14:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Shadows overcast around us in my bed
The candles light dances on the walls
My fingers play games like children in your hair
As your head rests on my chest
You fell sleep just over my heart
But I can still kiss your brow
And do so as much as I can
With out waking you
But I do wake you
Your eyes open and meet mine
And all my words are taken from me
And I am left speechless again
As you move upward
So your lips can meet mine
Do you want to steal my breath?
If so I am willing
I always am for anything
When it comes to being with you
We kiss and it feels like for ever
And for that I am grateful
As I am for all that you are
Your hand moves up to my face
We part and I warm it with a kiss
And then we kiss again
This means so much to me
I had an idea of how much before
But did not know its could be this
You mean so much to me
More than anything
You are everything to me
I cant help but want you more
I cant help but want more of you
But I can wait because till now
This is more than what I have ever wanted
This is more than what I could ever ask for
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Re: Willing
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:24:13 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, i am left speechless, "And all my words are taken from me
And I am left speechless again "
*RS*
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Re: Willing
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 02:29:03 AM AEST
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Beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Willing
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 04:37:58 AM AEST
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Nicely done, man.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Willing
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:04:11 AM AEST
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Two hearts entwined [spelt wrong sorry!]in this poem of love...
a beaut write that many like to relate to!
cheers!~ |
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Re: Willing
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:12:39 AM AEST
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| Very nice write! So heartfelt and wracked with good feelings, what else could a love poem need? Keep it up. |
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Re: Willing
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:17:01 AM AEST
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That was so beautifuly writen. I just loved this one.
Well done.
Jane~ |
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Re: Willing
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 01:56:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful feelings of love
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Willing
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by Archie on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 08:11:51 AM AEST
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| Great poem. You drew a great picture of thinking about the person you are in love with |
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