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Always On Your Toes
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 09:51:29 AM in AEST
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Gradual Suppressions
Instinctual Confessions
Always on your Toes
Thinking nothing of first Impressions
Elusive Illusions
Elongated Protrusions
Always Polite
Constant purging of Confessions
Mistaken Identities
Ritualistic Profanities
Always left Alone
In search of desperate Serenity
Masterful Raging Beauty
Immensely Aging Promiscuity
Always remaining Unfaithful
A forsaken Unity
Compulsive Obliviousness
Disconcerting Dizziness
Always a Liability
A Daunting Darkness
Impartial Justice
Social Riots
Always at War
Empty vials, no one Notices
Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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Re: Always On Your Toes
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by DoomedCuthulu on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 10:01:14 AM AEST
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| Wow *Whistles* I'm bordering on the hyper love it here. But I did. It's great. Took my speech away when I read it- Had to read it again. Loved it =D |
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Re: Always On Your Toes
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 01:06:49 AM AEST
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Geez...something about this one rings true even to this day...wow. You're good...you're really good. It scares me how sometimes something about a write of yours (old and new) will remind me somehow of my writing and/or thoughts. Which is really kind of odd! I like how this particular write got darker with each stanza...each line even! Very good.
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