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battle
Contributed by
olasunkanmi
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Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
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In the depth of the stream half dead
roaming in the air
seeing no legs but the mask of my destiny
hanging on the tree
as in the garden of eden
left with no pillar
but th spirits on my mind
I rather fail or be victorious
In the battle of eternity.
olasunkanmi rasheed olasunkanmi
kanmmy2@yahoo.com
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2002-12-24 12:30:00]
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Re: battle
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 12:33:46 PM AEST
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Ok the last lines of this poem captured me here where it says I rather fail or be victorious In the battle of eternity...that is DEEP.....i could write a novel on those lines alone...i've never quite seen eternity used in such a manner of wording, that was very unique, you my friend keep your talent shining through your words, i enjoy reading your poetry.....and thank you for sharing....
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