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Kamikaze
Contributed by
justingunshin
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 11:54:58 PM in AEST
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This little place stored a side
Continued to burn within me, deep inside
From the darkness I couldn't hide
I walked along and began to stride
The tempature that was given out
Came along and bursted out
The waves pulsating through
ticked within deep inside
Until my body had hemorrhaged
The burning flame had spewed out
Finally to break it self
Made me melt to my grave
Realizing it was my day
Flashback memories came before my vision
My last grasp of effort failing endlessly
My body slowly faded away
To self destruction, a self mutilation
Copyright ©
justingunshin
... [
2005-04-20 23:54:58]
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Re: Kamikaze
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by emystar on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 01:13:29 AM AEST
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so very sad but writtn to perfection.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Kamikaze
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 01:38:55 AM AEST
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Now this poem rocks.
Great job on this one honey bunny.
Sorry had to say that.If you need help with correcting any thing let me know.
Love Mom |
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Re: Kamikaze
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:17:14 AM AEST
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So you're the guy we've been hearing a lot about.
Well im not dissapointed at all it looks like the talents runs in the family.
Great write tho i really enjoyed it.
Jane~ |
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Re: Kamikaze
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:53:10 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC sorta ... you having already found fame in co-writes with your mom and all ... I like this and it carries a lot of potential ... we'll be watching you !!!! Mwuh haa haaaaa aha ahaaaaaaa !!!!!!
Nazmythian ~
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Re: Kamikaze
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by Kie-Kie on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:36:38 PM AEST
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All I can say is WOW that was amazing :D
*pouts* that's it I've officially decided everyone on this site is better than me *smiles* But that's ok
Well don't be a stranger PM me anytime, don't let felings like this buld up inside you until you burst, I'm always here for you to talk to
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Kamikaze
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:39:57 PM AEST
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great poem justin
make more poems
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