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Home again
Contributed by
chris_mahoney
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:39:54 AM in AEST
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She is the colour of all envious eyes,
The calm whisper of life, as one man dies,
If you leave her arms youll forever regret,
Her beauty is like no other, like the perfect sunset.
Ive left the love that gave life to my soul,
Happiness took me elsewhere for sometime, now life takes its toll,
Although her heart was always calling me home,
I wandered a different land, treading in anothers loam.
I walk these streets, and take in this sordid view,
Pondering the decision and reason I flew,
To be living amongst the hearts of my fellow men
Taking pride in our three colours, over and over again.
These envious eyes have now become my own,
Her arms have welcomed me, her reason unknown.
Ive always needed her, always wanted her hand,
Im happy to be home again, in green old Ireland.
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Re: Home again
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by Chris_Mahoney on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:43:00 AM AEST
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Nice....I like it, well written.
Different to all your other poems, this one is more light, but also I tiny bit sad...I know what it is like to leave home and Miss everything that gives meaning to your life.
Keep it up !! |
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Re: Home again
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by Artur_Drygalski on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:46:40 AM AEST
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Ha Ha...very funny Chris... come on, stop fooling around...yes I did notice what you've done, Im not that blind, but yes I do like it, and yes that was something like it :) :)
Sometimes I think you're a freak ;)
Keep it up, nice stuff !! :) |
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