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The Enemy
Contributed by
Jaycee
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:49:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Spend more time with him
than any I know
He's not friend or kin
He is my foe
To everyone else
he shows his favor
but his dealings with me
he's a tyrant and slaver
I wear no biohazard logo
his reaction's so weird
but undeniable his hate
which makes him so feared
Each day brings forth
new verbal abuse
I hope and I pray
that he'll cut me loose
One day I vomited
on my drive into work
My stomach so sick
at the thought of the jerk
Pulled sword out at home
and smashed a bookcase
not much consolation
Rather cut up his face
I'm not really a killer
I've been described as so mild
Just way past the edge
that's making me wild
I'm trapped in this job
'cause I need the money
People joke it off
but it's really not funny
So off to work I go
braced for the attack
I wanna go home
and never go back
Copyright ©
Jaycee
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2005-04-21 10:49:07]
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Re: The Enemy
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by Blank on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 12:20:28 PM AEST
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| wow! this really tells a story, I really enjoyed the read! thanks! |
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Re: The Enemy
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by PainfulSpirit06 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 01:00:57 PM AEST
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| I don't really know what to say about this poem. It's very inspirational and personal. I love it and keep it up. |
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Re: The Enemy
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 01:57:40 PM AEST
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deep and powerful
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Re: The Enemy
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 02:44:09 PM AEST
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| it's hard to believe you contained all that emotion in such a strong poetic structure! i give you all the credit to a great and powerful piece. Keep it up, and stay strong. |
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Re: The Enemy
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:23:58 AM AEST
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wow... thats interesting. a great write... but i cant believe that you hate your job so much. it must really suck for you to have to endure so much just to get the money. unless im looking at this poem the wrong way...
i really like the style and tone of your writing. you never cease to amaze me.
jennie* |
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Re: The Enemy
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:36:06 PM AEST
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Hmmm I wonder if anyone sees me as the enemy yet.. food for thought huh??
Hugs
Crazy Jenni |
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Re: The Enemy
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by Wandering-Soul on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 10:00:40 PM AEST
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| I just thought of something...is this a poem about your manager? Or a warning about all managers? |
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