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My Secret
Contributed by
Cici
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Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Feels like i'm being chased
Going faster and faster
Into another world of deministry
Being emphasised into something
I look behind, still running, know one is there
Suddenly I hit a stone wall
A lump was bruin on the head
I looked all around this odd place
It was very creepy and mysterious
It was a cave, scared, I went in
It almost seems unreal
There was lovely markings on the wall
I walked in and came to a three way path
Which one should I choose
I might get lost, but I need to get home
So I took the second path
Hoping it was the right one
I had been walking for 45 minutes
I am now tried and worn
Finally I reach a battered door
It makes a screech as I open it
All I could see was a mist of cobwebs
I was a bit scared as I hated them
I had to walk through them, it was the only way
I came to a big old chest
It was full of gold leaves
I took a few and placed them in my pocket
There was a flash
Then I was home
How I got to the cave I will never know
All I know is that I dicovered the treasure
Copyright ©
Cici
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2002-12-24 15:30:00]
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Re: My Secret
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:38:17 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful the visions you give in this poem are awesome...thanks for sharing this one CiCi....
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