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Dismembered Ballerina
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Broken hearted.
Leave me to die.
Wilted rose.
Despise in your eyes.
You ***** me.
Tainted my soul.
Watched with pleasure as I died.
You were the death of me.
You tore my limbs from my body.
Cut out my heart.
I shall play these games no longer.
Your are not my puppet master.
Remove these strings.
Toy with me no more.
Mend my heart.
Patch my soul.
Your dismembered ballerina.
Copyright ©
TwEeK
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2005-04-21 16:50:12]
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Re: Dismembered Ballerina
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by shelby on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:59:22 PM AEST
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heart breaking write your sadness reached out to me
Michelle |
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Re: Dismembered Ballerina
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:11:46 PM AEST
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| I have no idea what to say about this poem, the fact of the swearing being blocked out kind of ruined what you were trying to say. |
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Re: Dismembered Ballerina
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by pixie on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:47:37 PM AEST
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I felt your sadness strongly in this write, a pained and deep poem,
pix xx |
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Re: Dismembered Ballerina
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by EROTICADARLIN on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:15:40 AM AEST
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| GREAT WRITE CAN FEEL THE HURT AND PAIN IN THIS ONE! GOOD LUCK! |
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