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Warriors of Love, Masters of the Machine
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:17:50 PM in AEST
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Im writing you this letter
Place it in a frame
It contains your destiny
Im the one to blame
The words are unimportant
Its the song that stays the same
The melody is contagious
It screams out your name
Love matters little
In this cold game of war
Casualties are accepted
Only not those you cared for
Fingerprinted reminders
Of a memorable past season
The Kingdome rested peacefully
The sinner executed for high treason
Make it a strong one -
Bartender please
Make me forget the rest
Keep me off my knees
Im off to send this letter
A cure for this disease
I promise to never forget her
I swore Id never leave
Warriors of love
Masters of this machine
Release me my dignity
Protect me from the obscene
Keepers of the soul
Congregate late at night
They sit and ponder creation
How the dark became so white
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jyssvw22
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2005-04-21 19:17:50]
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Re: Warriors of Love, Masters of the Machine
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:35:21 PM AEST
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Oh My the poetry you write is surreal!!!!
I enjoyed every line, could relate.......felt it was truly real!
You have a much talent, indeed, I'm so glad I met you, your poetry makes me "feel"
And that's what it is all about.
Keep up the good work............good poetry indeed!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
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Re: Warriors of Love, Masters of the Machine
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 12:14:29 PM AEST
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Awww jyss...I really could've cried over this one, if I wasn't at work right now : )
I'm not kidding though. This may be the saddest piece I've read by you...This was written with such depth of emotion, that it breaks my heart to see what you went through. Oddly enough, some parts of this remind me of some things I've written. Very well done with this piece jyss.
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