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I think this is it
Contributed by
nogusto435
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Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:05:53 PM in AEST
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When will it end,
the pain and agony
everything seems that it is getting better,
but really it is stabbing me
I'm restricted of being myself,
I'm just a carbon copy
that is not me, I'm not like everyone else,
soon you won't be able to stop me
I have fallen once again,
to the world of hate
when will I go?,
What is my fate?
I hide this fact,
reason,unsure
that I'm unlike the people around me
and that I'm insecure
......continuation should be coming soon
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2005-04-21 20:05:53]
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Re: I think this is it
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by spazz911 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:56:46 PM AEST
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so far I haven't seen any end but they all say it will soon, hiding it will only keep them judging and it won't stop them to pretend that what your feeling isn't real, no one believed me when I said how I felt because I had hid it for too long... stick it out with me
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Re: I think this is it
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by Dorkfish on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 06:33:53 PM AEST
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| That was good...I think it's good with the ending it has, kinda keeps the reader like in wonder...it has a good effect. I like it. Whatever you do will only make it better though. Good luck & Great job! |
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