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friends
Contributed by
Keila
on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 09:12:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If you loose a friend,
its like you lost your head.
and if you loose your head,
your as good as dead,
if you loose your friend,you love so much
its like your head has turned so mush
if you want your head then keep your friends
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2005-04-21 21:12:27]
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Re: friends
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by tammysoleno on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:50:04 PM AEST
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some variety of words needed some line breaks and deleted words example keep what tou like
If you loose a friend,
its like losing your head.
and losing your head,
means your dead,
a lost of a friend
,you love so much
feels like your head
turned to mush
if you value your head
keep your friends
If it's good, you'll find out.
If it's not, throw it out
.
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