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My Muse
Contributed by
TheLoner
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 03:09:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wrote this to tell you
What you mean in my life
Your living testimony
To the beauty and wonders life holds
You dont know this
Because I dont know how to tell you
But you saved me
I have never felt like this before
I felt true love for the first time
But I can only imagine
If this feeling were mutual
You inspire me...
And you are my muse
Copyright ©
TheLoner
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2005-04-22 03:09:41]
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Re: My Muse
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by crap_snapper on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 04:46:20 AM AEST
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| I like the mood and the sentiment of the poem, I think poetry is about the way you say something rather than what you actually say and so this poem is maybe a little simplistic. But that will surly improve over time. At least I hope it will with what I write. Keep it up. |
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Re: My Muse
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:26:53 AM AEST
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I actually like this one. You have alot of potential in writing poetry. You've definately got what it takes. This poem is short, sweet and to the point. I think you're better of telling this particular Miss how u really feel about her.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: My Muse
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by marshmalloska on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:38:04 AM AEST
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| I think that a poetry is what you make it, and what you say matters just as much as how you say it, although you said it well. I just hope that how you feel is reciprocated =) |
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Re: My Muse
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:49:55 AM AEST
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Nice very nice.
I wouldn't change a thing.... |
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Re: My Muse
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 12:57:09 PM AEST
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| good poem, inspirational to those who should always express themselves to the ones they fall for |
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Re: My Muse
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:55:06 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.....I hope this site brings you as much enjoyment as it brings the poets here.
I love how you write this and I will definitely look forward to more of your work.
Jenni |
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