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Nightfall
Contributed by
SilmorilM
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:33:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Nightfall nearing
Luring,
Inviting,
Soothing,
Bitter sweet
Like dead liquor
Swallowing in breathless gulps
No memories
Indeed
None allowed
In this dance of salvation
I’ll indulge
My ears surrendered to lullabies
And sleep hopefully will come…
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SilmorilM
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2005-04-22 06:33:49]
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Re: Nightfall
(User Rating: 1 )
by Pianoman745 on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:36:34 PM AEST
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| I really like the flow of words and how they describe the mood. i get a really good picture of somone waiting for sleep. |
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Re: Nightfall
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:29:31 AM AEST
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| Interesting topic and good flow. |
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