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wishes in a dream
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:39:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Do you have have those times when you are sleeping . and you have dreams of a better life and there is wishes that
you would like to make in your dream and hoping it will come true. I have had so many of dreams that i have
wished would have come true.. I wish some of my dreams were real cause alot of them are so wonderful. But then when you
awake you find out it was nothing but dreams and wishes.
written by.. butterflygirl40 when you read my poems could you plz comment me on it. cause i am new here and i havent been
writing poems that long so plz let me know what you think.
thanxs .. Email Me At Autumn2859@yahoo.com
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Re: wishes in a dream
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by Sinned on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:11:19 AM AEST
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Butterflygirl40
Your poem ran more like a statement.I am going back to pome listings to find another by you. I am sure you have much to offer.Please don't let this comment offend you. Interested in reading more of your thoughts--- : )
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