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a vampire's wishes
Contributed by
vampirelover
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:46:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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a dark lonely night when the stars aren't shining, its pitch black and the blood is running, hearts are pounding i can hear them scream, running for their life, smelling the blood dripping out of their eyes and down there check the bliood taste so good, oh how i wish i could feed just once but human life is a valuable thing the a vampire who craves an eternal being
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Re: a vampire's wishes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:55:40 AM AEST
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"but human life is a valuable thing the a vampire who craves an eternal being "
Should that be "to a vampire" ?
But otherwise well done!!! |
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Re: a vampire's wishes
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:45:02 PM AEST
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not bad not bad...
It may need alittle work but i am sure you can do it. |
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Re: a vampire's wishes
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by shelby on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:15:37 PM AEST
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ooooo another vampire writer love it
Ill introduce myself Im the dark mistress
( evil grins) lol
Michelle |
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Re: a vampire's wishes
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:40:20 AM AEST
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| A very different topic and well written, but feels like its missing something. |
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