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Raining Roses
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:52:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is my soul to see
but a glimpse of light
through leaves of a tree
and here's what i am
tears of green eyes
caught by the hand
What will i become?
with a sandpaper facecloth,
a face of only one
In the cellar of me
Are malnourished eyes
deprived of all glee
My thoughts are what's left of
a kingdom, a dead dove
In a field but concealed
by four walls of cold steel
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In_a_While
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2005-04-22 09:52:31]
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Re: Raining Roses
(User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 02:03:11 PM AEST
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Thats creative
I like it
good work
--> Rae |
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Re: Raining Roses
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 01:42:01 AM AEST
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| Excellent poem, I love your wording and flow, very good. |
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