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NO ONE
Contributed by
ROSHAY9992000
on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 01:14:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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NO ONE
WHY MUST SHE DO THIS TO ME
COMING BACK INTO MY LIFE
I HAD FORGOTTEN ABOUT HER
AND PUSHED MY LOVE ASIDE
SHE WALKED OUT ON THE TWO OF US
WITHOUT A GLANCE BACK , NO LOVE LEFT BEHIND
THEN A YEAR LATER AND OUT OF THE BLUE
THERE SHE IS STANDING AT MY FRONT DOOR
I'VE WAITED OH SO LONG FOR THIS DAY TO COME
TO ENGULF HER WITH THE HATE INSIDE
BUT MY LOVE FOR OUR SON HOLDS ME IN LINE
I WANT TO HATE THIS WOMAN
WITH EVERY BREATH THAT I TAKE
BUT ONE LOOK AT CHRISTIAN
WITH A HUGE SMILE ON HIS FACE
CURES ALL THAT HATE WITHIN ME
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ROSHAY9992000
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2005-04-22 13:14:33]
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Re: NO ONE
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 08:55:33 AM AEST
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| Good poem. I think you needed a couple of more lines to this. You leave an ambiguous ending. |
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