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The Devils Department
Contributed by
caughtinadream
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 03:21:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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It's as though I'm not living my life
Everyday its the same pain and strife.
I try to smile, but never will it last
My pain is the future, mixed with the present and past.
Is anyone there to save me?
What do I have to do?
This time isn't getting any better
My pain will never be through.
Picking up the pieces of my shattered soul on the ground
I am gone, I'm lost, and no where to be found.
I sleep away my worries to fight away the pain
It's when I wake up that I have nothing left to gain.
I'll walk past you and say hello my friend
But little do you know I'm finished, this is my end.
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caughtinadream
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2005-04-22 15:21:42]
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Re: The Devils Department
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:34:11 PM AEST
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wow
why has no one commented on this yet? its a very nice poem! i like it very much :D |
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Re: The Devils Department
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by Lucid_Tides on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:01:26 PM AEST
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| This Sonnet is very nice. 14 lines of beautiful wording, to describe the pain of living this faithless life. It's easy to lose faith, but do what you can to keep it. Our emotions of life will be repaid in the end. |
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