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An Exception
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 05:45:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This heart has turned to ashes
The fiery glow that once fueled it
has long been put to sleep
And beneath all love and eternity
there are some who are exceptions
those of us who cannot find this "love"
We find eternity meaningless
And shadows of nothing
creep upon us
yet we are still here
anchored by our fear
and the hope that there is still hope
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bonita2689
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2005-04-22 17:45:18]
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Re: An Exception
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by NightOwl on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:37:40 PM AEST
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Very, very well done! So true...
We find eternity meaningless
And shadows of nothing
creep upon us
Those were my personal favorite lines... I can really relate to them, unfortunately.
Awesome write!
*~Erin~* |
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