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How The Dark Became So White
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:10:04 PM in AEST
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Im writing you this letter
Place it in a frame
It contains your destiny
Im the one to blame
The words are unimportant
Its the song that stays the same
The melody is contagious
It screams out your name
Love matters little
In this cold game of war
Casualties are accepted
Only not those you cared for
Fingerprinted reminders
Of a memorable past season
The Kingdome rested peacefully
The sinner executed for high treason
Make it a strong one -
Bartender please
Make me forget the rest
Keep me off my knees
Im off to send this letter
A cure for this disease
I promise to never forget her
I swore Id never leave
Warriors of love
Masters of this machine
Release me my dignity
Protect me from the obscene
Keepers of the soul
Congregate late at night
They sit and ponder creation
How the dark became so white
Copyright ©
jyssvw
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2005-04-22 18:10:04]
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Re: How The Dark Became So White
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by shelby on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:17:43 PM AEST
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flowing and brilliant
Michelle |
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Re: How The Dark Became So White
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 07:39:45 PM AEST
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| This is very thought-provoking... And Indeed I like the flow, very nice job! |
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Re: How The Dark Became So White
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 08:11:53 PM AEST
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A thought provoking piece of poetry with verses that flow so well. An excellently conveyed poem. I loved it. Well done.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: How The Dark Became So White
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:35:19 PM AEST
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Once again I commend you.
Your poetry has depth, width, and dimensions so fine.
I love reading each and every line.
Interesting "How The Dark Became So White" Great Title..........makes one wonder if we are still living in the darkness today.
Fine work in every way!
Lovingcritters
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Re: How The Dark Became So White
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by JacobsKK on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:44:26 PM AEST
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| I am DEFINATELY going to read more of your poems, this was just fantastic. |
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