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Basement
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:46:52 PM in AEST
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I took the elevator to the basement,
The elevator broke
And no one has yet come to fix it
I dont have the right tools to fix it
And no one is here to fix it
The elevator has broke and I cant get up to the first floor
Im stuck in the basement and there is nothing I can do
Those floors above me barely exist
Cause I cant get out of this basement
There is no one around who has stopped to fix this elevator
The ones who have tried dont have the right tools
So, Im stuck in this basement with no one else around
Im in the lowest part of this building
And I cant get up from it
The elevator has broken on me and I cant leave
Cant get back to the first floor
I cant fix the elevator
I do not have the right tools to fix it
No one else has come around to fix the elevator
So I am stuck in this basement
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Re: Basement
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by JacobsKK on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:13:28 PM AEST
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| Very interesting. I can tell already that you have your own creative writing style, butdont worry, thats a good thing. AS is this poem, its really good. |
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Re: Basement
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by spazz911 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:20:47 PM AEST
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tell me what tools to use, u no im no good at fixing things.......
~kc~ |
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Re: Basement
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by blue_angel on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:34:09 PM AEST
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its ok, you're not alone. im stuck there wit ya. we'll pull our resources and find a way out... it might take some time and brain power, but where there's a will, there's a way. never forget that.
jennie* |
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Re: Basement
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:51:12 PM AEST
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| from someone who's been stuck in the basement for a while now, good job in describing it :D |
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