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Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 09:53:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I miss you my dear love
Like the deserts miss the rain
As I watch momentarily
Over the rugged terrain
As constant as the stars glow
My love for you so fine
Like a heavenly aura
The moon it shall out shine
The night sky and it's constellations
Have made our love a star
Hanging brightly and beautifully
Blazing way up far
You refuel the dying embers
That rest within my heart
Ignite the sparks called passion
Fusing them with love to start
So as the night falls
My heart's still missing you
I look up to the starry night sky
Our star burns with love so true...
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mina-1
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by JacobsKK on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:12:18 PM AEST
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| Wow, you have got a great skill with rhyming. Geez, and this poem has but so much meaning...hmm...I think I'll read it again. Great work by the way. :-) |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by sride686 on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:51:21 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem and I hope you continue to write so I can read more of your work. It flows really nice and is a good read…..Steve |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by emystar on
Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 11:00:33 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by venkat on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:12:35 AM AEST
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| Very exquisite write..such love is divine. your heart shines here..:-) venkat |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by dvsnme816 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:31:07 AM AEST
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Wow Sue,
I am exhilirated by the narration that you distribute towards the onlooking audience. Hands down I can give you a 5 on the post, but I feel like giving you a 10 (if only I could vote twice).
It was surveyed as the love from far away, I can understand exactly what you are talking about. I feel chills run down my spine as though the poem brought the fingertips of the long awaited one to me.
You always have that little special something in you poem that makes it stand out more than the rest. I wanna know if you can sell me some of that talent, because I need some of that. :)
I hope to read more from you again, it's always a pleasure and all of them are beautiful.
XOXOXO
Alex |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:53:25 AM AEST
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What a wonderful write, i do know what you mean and i can really well relate to this write.
So as the night falls
My heart's still missing you
I look up to the starry night sky
Our star burns with love so true...
That stanza was jusr perfection.
Jane~ |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:35:42 AM AEST
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wow beautiful and very sweet.
and very well written.great job. |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:12:01 PM AEST
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GREAT poem
better then my moms |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:38:39 PM AEST
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I love this tittle, there was song with the same tittle by " THE GIRL LEFT HOME "
now i have this beautiful poem 2 love all
over again, and it is beautiful . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:56:18 AM AEST
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lovely ideas in this poem you should feel so proud of this piece - it seems you get better with every write mina!! loved the line 'As constant as the stars glow
My love for you so fine
Like a heavenly aura
The moon it shall out shine' but every line was superb! |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by inoc on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:55:25 AM AEST
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Dear Sue,
Every -word -in your poem has it's own meaning so cleverly written!.....I felt this poem says a lot more than what we read...talented YOU ARE!
cheers!~ |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:25:56 AM AEST
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Awesomely beautiful. Really awesomely beautiful.
Scott |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:40:00 AM AEST
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The title starts of with a song I love
And I miss you like the deserts miss the rain
A simply beautiful write
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 10:02:43 PM AEST
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beautifully written... your poetry is enchanting:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Missing you, Like the deserts miss the rain...
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 12:00:55 AM AEST
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MINA,THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL,JUST LIKE YOU! IT DESCRIBES IN FULL DETAIL OF WHAT YOUR HEART IS TRYING TO SAY!! IT WAS GREAT & I LOVED IT ALOT!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!! |
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