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Speak, My Fire
Contributed by
jacobskk
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Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 10:08:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Talk to me forever.
Tell me whats on your mind.
Talk about your past, even if
The right words are hard to find.
Im not here to judge you.
Im only here to help.
I really love your voices,
And thats how Ive always felt.
Whenever youre ready, lets visit your past,
Just once again, once more.
You dont even include past and me,
In the same sentence anymore.
Always waiting to be ignited,
The spark of happiness in you.
Ill coax that fire back to life,
Come, now, coalslight up too.
Copyright ©
jacobskk
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2005-04-22 22:08:31]
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Re: Speak, My Fire
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:40:50 AM AEST
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| Aww! Such a beautifully sweet write! Excellent work! |
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Re: Speak, My Fire
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:35:28 AM AEST
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So beautifully written and expressed. A very heart warming poem. A pleasnt and enjoyable read.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: Speak, My Fire
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:37:05 PM AEST
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| awesome poem. sounds like you are talking to me, like what a friend of mine said. but we don't talk much anymore. this poem has inspired me a lot. it won't open me up, but the poem has made me feel a little better. thanks a lot. and keep up the good writing. |
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