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Death to Life
Contributed by
sride686
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:08:24 AM in AEST
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If I could Id kill the world to kill my pain
Wash it in my blood straight down to its grave
Like a crimson tide my rage would flow
Like a tidal wave to take away every soul
Not event God could stand
If only I had a gun in my hand
I would take their lives and then take my own
For going to Hell is my only goal
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sride686
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2005-04-23 04:08:24]
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Re: Death to Life
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:15:20 AM AEST
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Steve this is a very thought provoking piece of poetry. I can sense ur pain and anger through ur words. Hang tuff my dear friend for I can only relate too well to ur poem. May time heal ur heart. My thoughts and prayers are with u.
Otherwise a sad touching poem, written so well.
Hugs,
~Sue~ |
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Re: Death to Life
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:42:01 PM AEST
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not much 2 say but that keep writting out your
feelings and know we r here 4u . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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