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Blood means nothing
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:08:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In my eyes your the same Change is too late You've already cause this pain You've sealed your fate
Your not welcomed How dare you to think that you are This is your outcome This is what you get for leaving this scar
Things get rough But who siad that was an excuse to leave? Guess you just gave up Is this what you wanted to achieve?
Dont ever tell me you love me Those words are just another let down I will admit that this isnt easy But its your turn for this breakdown
Grow up and stop being so selfish It wasnt your choice to make You started this anguish You cause this heartbreak
Even after the distress and pain I'm still standing here I am not the same I am no longer as i appear
I learned your from your mistakes And now I realize i a better then you
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2005-04-23 06:08:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blood means nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by cherrycoke on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:58:41 PM AEST (User
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wow i can't believe no one else commented on this .. i really like how you wrote this .. i can actually understand it and it's not random or amateur like some of the other stuff i've read on here before. good job
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Re: Blood means nothing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shishke_Bob on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:39:00 PM AEST (User
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Truly tough stuff to go through, I feel for you and the pain that you had to endure,( I will pray for you to feel better.) this opoem spoke with emotioans and true heart feelings some thing that is hard to do (not knowing if others will understand of accept it.) thank you for sharing it with us (shows that you are getting bette) just know that if you need to talk we are all here for you any time. please do keep posting for us to read.
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