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Without A care...
Contributed by
inoc
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:12:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Take those feelings away
hurt
pain
sickness
It makes we weak and makes me say
terrible
horrible things
that I don't mean okay?
But I release them with
no effort at all
caring not at all
I feel bad
but don't care
I feel sad
without a care
I ignore
I don't want a life to explore
I want to curl in a ball
forget that I am here
without your stare...
Silence is terrifying
I can't scream
I feel mean!
Why do I exist....
my life I want to resist
Make me blank
I don't want to be here
or anywhere....
just leave me alone....
killing myself is the only...
only way I want to make myself...
-happiest?!
I don't want to know God...He is my worst thought...
take Him away...I don't need Him...
at all
EVER!!!!
u n d e r s t a n d !
Guess what ...
...I....DO...!
One day I will realise this...
in my own time...
in my own way,
just keep that in the
-back of MY mind!
~~
Copyright ©
inoc
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2005-04-23 06:12:52]
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Re: Without A care...
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by Nos_Bunny on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:10:47 AM AEST
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| wow dude... or dudette (isnt concentrating on names just now) .... um I THINK I know what you mean, you should check my info and read the poem called 'Rent A Life' I don't wanna spam your feelings, so I wont post a link, but that.....is exactly how I feel about life.... hold on....hold on |
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Re: Without A care...
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:49:36 AM AEST
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commiting suicide,what a waste of a life
i realise that now,we are all here for something,the world doesnt ask much of us,just to live,and a selfish act,of peircing your skin,just to let all the pain go,isnt going to help,i use to feel like that,sometimes i still do,but just remember to hang in there,if God isnt there for you and you dont want him/her to be,then someone is always holding your hand,family friends,they are the light and living God you need when you feel down....
love han xxx |
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Re: Without A care...
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by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:00:49 PM AEST
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I hope this is just your muse talking and you aren't really thinking about it. deep write, very pained and sad
pix xx |
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Re: Without A care...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:37:14 PM AEST
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I would miss u and your beautiful writting . . .
((((((inoc)))))
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Without A care...
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by inoc on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:02:28 AM AEST
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...just thought I'd mention...
this poem is not directed from me [though yes it does sound like it...sorry!]...but I wrote this in the eyes of someone that is feeling that way....as I have noticed -many- people young and old and in between, do feel like this at times...sorry for the confusion....cheers to all!~ |
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Re: Without A care...
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by Nomie on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:19:07 AM AEST
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that was a very different approach at writing! i like it!! And it's almost like you've written my exact thoughts out too.
Be strong. Don't let it win and get the better of u! Fight! :)
great poem though! :) |
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