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My Ears Bleed
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:57:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My ears bleed with pain
The deadly sound of silence
Yet I hear nothing.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-04-23 10:57:25]
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Re: My Ears Bleed
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:03:46 AM AEST
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A very well writen Haiku Krissie.
Im still not sure how it goes, but i like this.
Miss ya loads,
Jane |
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Re: My Ears Bleed
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:38:00 AM AEST
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wow that was great krissi girl.
I was never good at haikaor whatever you call it.
lol anyways great job.
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Re: My Ears Bleed
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by In_a_while on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:23:26 PM AEST
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| How eery and dark. I love it, seems a breath of fresh air to the structure usually seen in the poems here. Keep it up! |
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Re: My Ears Bleed
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by SimplyMe on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:39:56 PM AEST
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Such powerful lines. I don't even understand Haiku Poetry, but i love your work all the same.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: My Ears Bleed
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:05:57 PM AEST
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Well done, Pixie....
Good Haiku..
Jenni |
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Re: My Ears Bleed
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:22:33 PM AEST
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New yes, the usual the writting and the poetess, magnificent as ever . . . **********
(((((( 4 pix ))))) Dorian Chambers |
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Re: My Ears Bleed
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 12:04:15 PM AEST
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Nicely done---strong emotions displayed with ease....Personally, my ears bleed every time I try and sing....lol Take Care love.
Scorp ; ) |
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