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Died for love
Contributed by
sexytexasguy
on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I loved her with all my heart and soul
Now she had to let me go
I went to my room, not knowing what to say
And grabbed the gun, i had hid away
I put a bullet in, and spun the chamber
I felt no more happyness, just anger
I put the gun up to my head
And thought about what she said
I didnt mean anything to her, I was just a toy
She was really in love with another boy
It felt like a dagger stabbing me in the heart
I knew it wasnt true, she had loved me from the start
I heard the bang, as the bullet peirced my head
My life was no more, my soul was dead
I died for her, she was all i was thinking of
I had died for love
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2002-12-25 01:00:00]
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Re: Died for love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 03:21:40 AM AEST
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Very good writing but lets hope you never act on it. Live for luv!
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy |
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Re: Died for love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 04:03:00 AM AEST
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| Whoah so so so good but so so so sad but hey that's life and this poem was great. |
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Re: Died for love
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:09:35 PM AEST
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Oh my beautiful friend nobody is worth doing this over, it may seem as though they are at the time we are hurting but trust me there is somthing better out there for you that wants your love and wants all you have to offer to her.....trust in yourself and beleive in yourself....if this is what your really thinking of doing then i know nothing i say or anyone else says will matter, but know that if you need to talk that i dont mind listening my friend....i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Died for love
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by orgygirl on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 01:19:21 AM AEST
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| ahh many good writes come from stoners. I liked this piece but you should never kill your self over something like that or even at all . Well I hope this wasnt anything serious. Later |
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Re: Died for love
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by venkat on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 03:49:40 AM AEST
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| Your spirit is alive. You will never die for a foolish girl.you must grow strong. Think about many other things whih are more valuable. Good write.Love to live and not to die. |
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Re: Died for love
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by Undeadsuperstar on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:48:38 AM AEST
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| I like to write when i'm fried too. It reminds me of another that i read earlier today... |
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Re: Died for love
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by JusMeOtay on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 12:25:45 AM AEST
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| Great write...bad idea...but then again you've heard that before. I encourage your writings...you've obviously a good brain...try and keep it that way |
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