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Artificial God
Contributed by
thepos
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The oxidizing is cold,
Our ***** lives are mold.
The devastation is bold,
I am here so behold.
The crowd seems to grin,
But they scream within.
They will cut off skin,
If they know it's a sin.
I will bite the hand,
If it's what you demand.
Can you understand?
That this is what I planned.
If you could only observe,
That this is what we deserve.
We should stop to preserve,
While I chew on the nerve.
If it's any concern,
I think the world should burn.
I think our god should turn,
So we could all spurn.
The information is wrong,
The crucifixion was long.
Sing his pain in song,
Now stand where you belong.
--Evan L.--
more of my poetry at: http://thepoemsofsorrow.com
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thepos
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Re: Artificial God
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:37:14 AM AEST
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| i don't see why your poem is the least read. i actually think it is one of the best on this site. i think from this poem i can tell your views on religion...........and their so true.......well.........if what you mean is what i think you mean.....yeah.....you should check out my poetry sometime and post a comment and tell me what you think. keep up the good work! bye! |
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Re: Artificial God
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:38:42 AM AEST
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| and (they're) so true............(sorry mistake) |
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