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The Place Where the Dark Goes
Contributed by
Dereku
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:56:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Theres a place out there
That the dark goes
To hide and deceive
All that it knows
It covers, it smothers
And it warps all it can
And so it was
That the minds of man
Were taken and shaped
Into what can
And will
Be all that is found
When the hands of time
Decide to wind down
It is all that is
And it is all that can
Be taken and viewed
When only unscrewed
It bursts and it bounds
It tries to astound
It falls flat to the floor
It craves, and wants more
There is a place that the light tries
To avoid and escape, to deny to the grave
It knows and it shows all that it will
Because of the dark that wants to kill
The spirit, the body, the mind, and the heart
It wants to destroy, if it can, the start
Of all things good, all things pure
Theres a place out there
That calls all to it
To maim and to mock
To poison the flock
Sometimes it loses, sometimes it wins
Feeding on sin
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Dereku
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2005-04-23 22:56:00]
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Re: The Place Where the Dark Goes
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:10:33 PM AEST
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"well it's about the........?"...about the what?
i really liked it though...it's nice......i really like the part that says," it falls flat to the floor, it craves and wants more"......it reminds me of my friends poem that says....," like a fetus on the floor, like an attict wanting more, like a sex slave screaming and sore"........well.......yeah.......um.........i like your poem.......keep it up....i'd like to read more soon.
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