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Woes Me
Contributed by
Lenore_Poe15
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Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:04:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Oh woes me
I see the blade coming
Oh owes me
It shines like its laughing
Oh owes me
Who be the holder of they sword?
Oh woes me
I pray to they lord.
Oh owes me
Its coming down so slowly
Oh woes me
It strikes so harshly
Oh owes me
I bleed and the sword sheaths
Oh praiseth thee
I feel no pain, and take they last breaths
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Re: Woes Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:07:24 AM AEST
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This is neat. interesting, but neat. I like how you changed woes to owes every other line, and all together the last, it made it more interesting, and unique. Very nicely done.
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Re: Woes Me
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:43:09 AM AEST
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i like how you put this together. it's really interesting. you should check out mine soon.
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