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Remarkable
Contributed by
SimplySammixl3
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:41:38 PM in AEST
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Secret Cries,
Cries for love,
Love that she will never find,
The kind they narrate in fairy tales,
Extraordinary fate bringing them together,
She dreams that he will come,
To carry her away,
But then the evil objects calls,
It calls her from her marvelous dream,
She stalls for a minute,
To rub out her eyes,
She does not know why she cried that night,
Maybe because that one love that she wants,
Is right in front of her eyes,
But conversely oh, so very far.
That is the why,
the why of her cries,
Secret cries for love,
She emotionally died that night.
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Re: Remarkable
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:22:25 PM AEST
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| Why is this remarkable. There is nothing extraordinary about heart ache and death. Your words and title are inconsistent. Good write bad title. |
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Re: Remarkable
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by Channing on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:25:47 PM AEST
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| Good write, however the title kind of threw me off...but still a very good poem. |
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