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Recollections II
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Deprivation, Molestation
Humiliation
Lamentations
Of a broken nation
Controlling
Self-loathing
Foolish pride, upholding
The page is folding
My words a molding
Bittersweet releases
The blood never ceases
Falling to pieces
Suicide forever teases
Invisible tears
Horrid, nightly fears
Ruthless sneers
From ignorant peers...
Nothingness
Forever worthless
Words of emptiness
Soulless
Insuppressible hate
I know my fate
Mutilation initiates
No longer can I wait
Death lingers
With icy fingers
My freedom bringer
Forgotten legacy
Never meant to be
Free
Eyes are blind, they cannot see,
The monstrosity
The mystery
Me...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
... [
2005-04-24 18:15:22]
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Re: Recollections II
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by edwynne on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 02:05:50 PM AEST
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Re: Recollections II
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:25:11 AM AEST
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I am surprised that this has only received
one comment. I agree with you that it isn't
your best, but then again I don't think it is
possible for you to write a bad poem. I
thought this was quite good with all the
rhyming and what not. Overall, a very good
poem and I liked the change of pace.
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Re: Recollections II
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:35:48 PM AEST
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New styles are always nice to see and experiment with. That is a sign of growth. I think the experiment was a success and hope you continue to delve into this and other styles as well. I too, think that there is little your pen could create that is not a work of art.
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Re: Recollections II
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by jessejames on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:18:35 PM AEST
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good job
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