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We Just Walked Away
Contributed by
Vixen99
on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Green eyes,Brown hair
Sweet smile,Gone
Strong hands,Remarkable words
Silliness,Away
Long looks, Tender hugs
Cozy nights, Long stretched days
Short kisses, Long talks
Slipped, We just walked away
Blue eyes, Blonde hair
Outragious smile, There
Petite hands, Gentle words
Slow tears, Coming
Still looks, Quietly pacing
Long nights, Short passed days
Goodbye kisses, Last touches
We just walked away
Copyright ©
Vixen99
... [
2002-12-25 17:40:00]
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Re: We Just Walked Away
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 10:01:22 PM AEST
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This is so sad....but you say it was mutual and you put it so beautifully how you both just walked away...thanks for sharing this one ...i hope everything is ok with you both.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: We Just Walked Away
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by Vixen99 on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 12:35:42 AM AEST
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| It's taking time but we're working things out. Thank God! It would be so hard to lose someone so good...we've been through so much together. Thanks for your comment. :D |
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Re: We Just Walked Away
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by philly on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 01:34:48 AM AEST
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| i dont feel a lot of emotion in this poem. It has a lot of description on the physical aspect, but emotionally you describe not a single thing. |
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Re: We Just Walked Away
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by Vixen99 on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 09:02:26 PM AEST
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| You're right...I didn't describe how I felt ... I just put that in the comment box. Describing it the way I did personally made me feel the whole scene all over again and feeling your heart break when you look at the person one last time. I guess I confused people with that. Sorry. Will keep better attention to my comments. The poem really wasn't supposed to be about emotion...it was supposed to take me to closing my eyes and remembering what I did that day...that's all. |
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